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You ask me what?
What kind of love doesn't beat in my tired up heart?
That suspended feeling flooding through my sacred blood.
The sensation of happiness, desire and lust
crawls through my little tender soul.

You ask me when?
When haven't i dreamed of such flawless person like you?
I have lied beside mannish boys and effeminate girls,
but I have never had this revelation of this open dream.
The dream i had never thought would ever come true.

You ask me where?
Where does my heart belong to?
Yes that is one hell of a good questing.
Just listen and you will hear my delicate sweetish heart's rhythm
beating behind your chest of weaved flesh, limed bones and air-filled lungs

You ask me who?
Who could ever compete with your loving caring heart.
The one risqué heart you have giving to me?
That heart i would be a guardian for,
and keep safe with my life at stake?

You ask me why?
Why would i risk my own meaningless life for you?
My brief life, which would be without meaning if it wasn't for you?
You who have been the angel, who brought the lifesaving light
to my shattered dreams and hopes and to my mortal crippled heart.

You ask me How?
I don't know how, but you are the pure essence of you
Nothing more, nothing less.
And i do not desire more than you,
'cause you are the only thing who can satiate my starving inner beast.

You ask me which?
Which person doesn't have a hungry creature in our darkest corner of our soul?
The one who only can be tamed by pure love and goodness.
If you ask me, i would give every kinds of promise,
the final questing is, which promise do you want me to praise?
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Maker: Badgirl1942
A love questing poem :D
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=LordNobleheart Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for giving me the "kick in the pants" I needed to stop delaying the showing of my own poems. BTW, this poem is quite interesting. I will need to read over a few times before I can really comment.
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!AncillaTheBlackAngel Apr 19, 2012  Student General Artist
!i'm looking forward to it :-D and by the way your comment with all the music i answear later, when i have time to listen to Them all :-D
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:iconkatanakyodzo:
as always great!
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!AncillaTheBlackAngel Apr 16, 2012  Student General Artist
hihi :D why is it great :D i'm just asking because i want to know what is the good in the poem, so i maybe can get even better :D
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:iconkatanakyodzo:
because in this poem is a part of you your experiences, he is very sincere, you know, as if the star of the soul
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!AncillaTheBlackAngel Apr 16, 2012  Student General Artist
hihi :) Ya i also loved it when i gave it to him :)
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:iconkatanakyodzo:
you devote his poems to his favorite person?
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!AncillaTheBlackAngel Apr 16, 2012  Student General Artist
his poems? who is he? It is me who have wrote them to my boyfriend :D
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:iconkatanakyodzo:
Forgive me, I sometimes confuse pronouns in a foreign language (I mean you devote poems .. I see your answer is that they are for your boyfriend
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!AncillaTheBlackAngel Apr 16, 2012  Student General Artist
okay :D now i'm not confused anymore hihi :D
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